When Do I Miss You?
Danny Hanson | April 28, 2008 | 11 comments
When do I miss you?
It’s not when I can’t pull you out of my thoughts and kiss you
Its not when I haven’s seen you in a year
Its not when I awake from my dream and you’re not really here
Its not when your name doesn’t appear on my phone
Its not when I call your landline and you’re not home
It’s not when I send an e-mail and get none in return
Its not when my letter gets lost without my concern
It’s when I think your departure left me strong
But the weakness in me says I’m wrong
Category: Poems
its like u put my words in urs…….beautiful
beautiful!
Nice one!
thanks umara….good to know u can relate to it!
i have to second that … its like you gave words to my thoughts ! … beautiful ! …. and so true !
awwwwwwww……….thanks everyone,feels good to know you not alone in your thoughts…….really appreciate it.
u know guys…its weird but i think all human beings relate to each other at a neutral line of a similar experience…what we feel is the same..the characters and intensity change and also what the dust leaves behind matters…what we do with ourselves after that makes us who we are….beautiful and unique….
thats true umara…….thats why eventhough you don know me…you could realate to my poem.
Good job, Danny. Laju
Danny Hanson,this poem gives me palpitation…that is a PROBLEM,young man!
thanks laju and nanah
lmao nanah,palpitations?!