Putting You Down
Falling Rose | February 20, 2008 | 2 comments
They said you’ll never make it
Now that you’ve changed
Now that you’re leaving
They said you’re mistaken
Now that you see another way
Now that you’ve stopped needing
And they try to bring you down
Just when you reach satisfaction
They keep putting you down
Now you’re not sure of their intentions
So you turn around and leave
No one’s gonna break your dream
Now that you’ve found a way
Now that you’re safe
Category: Poems
the poem is so nice …..
They said you’ll never make it
Now that you’ve changed
Now that you’re leaving
<<<<this part is so expressing and it has simple way to express the motions and feeling
thanks so much Falling Rose & plz keep going
A beautiful poem that reflects human nature and how our society works. It’s a universal theme that we must cope everyday whether at school, at work, at home or even within oneself. A simple poem that teaches us how to be strong. I love it very much. Good job, Falling Rose. I await your next writing…