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I Still Love You

It has been a long time since I last saw you
I was crying then and you were worried
You just murmured “don’t know what to say”
And I replied “I know as I love you”

You eyes already said no to me
And your body had turned its back suddenly
You were ready to go forever
And I was ready to die

I still hear your steps on the stairs
I still remember how hard it was to stay behind the door
I still see your face looking back at me over your shoulder
And I still love you!

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  1. zim says:

    not bad not bad! I am gonna send it to some one ;-)

  2. hammad says:

    ufffff damn u r too gud keep it up

  3. Mihir says:

    Hey!! Nice one..Keep it up! :)

  4. Hazan says:

    @zim: hehehe sure sure go ahead [:)]

    @hammad: hey thank you so much…nice to see u in my literary world..

    @mihir: Thank you uncle ji [:p]

  5. Laju K. says:

    Hopefully she read this poem, Hazan.

  6. Hazan Ozgul says:

    i guess you meant “he” coz i m a “she” :)
    and it is not s a reality-based one…i wouldnt like to feel such a pain at any stage of my life….hope no one experiences such pain ever!

  7. ravi says:

    your absence is killing me, you are there and i m here, wish that will change and i ll finally have you near.i look up on you, my heart is full of you….

  8. Hazan Ozgul says:

    @ravi
    hey nice work…even your comments are like poems….hehehe
    thnx

  9. Gugu Monster says:

    Good work lil kid

  10. Hazan Ozgul says:

    Thanks Mr. Gugu…

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