Comments on: Last Minute Sun http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun think free Mon, 26 Jul 2010 04:20:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Amir http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-301 Amir Tue, 29 Apr 2008 06:37:52 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-301 Thank you Sara :) ... appreciate the appreciation :) Thank you Sara :) … appreciate the appreciation :)

]]> By: Sara http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-300 Sara Tue, 29 Apr 2008 06:16:49 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-300 Amazing story! You have a perfect understanding of emotions. Keep it up! Amazing story! You have a perfect understanding of emotions. Keep it up!

]]> By: Amir http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-299 Amir Mon, 21 Apr 2008 07:49:04 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-299 Thank you Farhan :) Its always a good feeling when someone appreciates your work :) Thank you Farhan :) Its always a good feeling when someone appreciates your work :)

]]> By: Farhan Hafeez http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-298 Farhan Hafeez Fri, 18 Apr 2008 09:52:41 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-298 This was definitely one of the best piece of writing i have found on internet ... nice bro :) .. keep it up :) This was definitely one of the best piece of writing i have found on internet … nice bro :) .. keep it up :)

]]> By: Amir http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-297 Amir Thu, 17 Apr 2008 06:58:38 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-297 Thank you Batty ... So ... do I get a secret email detailing the long list of grammatical mistakes ... so that I can sneak in sometime to fix those without anyone finding out ;) Thank you Batty …

So … do I get a secret email detailing the long list of grammatical mistakes … so that I can sneak in sometime to fix those without anyone finding out ;)

]]> By: batty http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-296 batty Thu, 17 Apr 2008 06:21:21 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-296 DAMN!! thats such a good story.. its moving.. i find the conversations b/w them particularly interesting, because times seems to freeze, and one feels like an on looker.. a few grammatical mistakes here n there but overall, amazing! DAMN!! thats such a good story..
its moving..
i find the conversations b/w them particularly interesting, because times seems to freeze, and one feels like an on looker..

a few grammatical mistakes here n there
but overall, amazing!

]]> By: Amir http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-295 Amir Wed, 16 Apr 2008 07:15:48 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-295 Haha ... I didn’t know I had such convincing powers ... I should use these powers to hypnotize people or something :D And ... thank you :) Haha … I didn’t know I had such convincing powers … I should use these powers to hypnotize people or something :D

And … thank you :)

]]> By: Memoona http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-294 Memoona Wed, 16 Apr 2008 07:11:50 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-294 :D Dude!!! I Must say...the title ROX :) :D Dude!!! I Must say…the title ROX :)

]]> By: Amir http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-293 Amir Wed, 16 Apr 2008 05:56:21 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-293 Mamoona Thank you for appreciation :) The title of the story ... came from the thought of a day in winters when sometimes (at least in Rawalpindi) you wouldn’t see sun all day long ... it remains cloudy and dark (my kinda weather though) ... and then ... just when its sunset time, the clouds give way ... just a tiny bit ... and all you can do is catch a glimpse of the sun ... somehow, its enough for you to remind that there's been a day and there is sunshine and there will be a sunrise ... Same difference here ... Elisa needed a slight glimpse of light ... a hint of hope ... even if it was at the very last minute ... even if it meant she will have to walk through another night ... it still meant there will be another day after that ... Sun is still there I normally don’t keep straight forward titles ... or may be they are ... I wouldn’t know ... I just go with the first thought that runs through my mind ... for this story, the first thought was the last minute sun at the end of a winter day :) Mamoona
Thank you for appreciation :)
The title of the story … came from the thought of a day in winters when sometimes (at least in Rawalpindi) you wouldn’t see sun all day long … it remains cloudy and dark (my kinda weather though) … and then … just when its sunset time, the clouds give way … just a tiny bit … and all you can do is catch a glimpse of the sun … somehow, its enough for you to remind that there’s been a day and there is sunshine and there will be a sunrise …

Same difference here … Elisa needed a slight glimpse of light … a hint of hope … even if it was at the very last minute … even if it meant she will have to walk through another night … it still meant there will be another day after that … Sun is still there

I normally don’t keep straight forward titles … or may be they are … I wouldn’t know … I just go with the first thought that runs through my mind … for this story, the first thought was the last minute sun at the end of a winter day :)

]]> By: Memoona http://www.libremagazine.com/featured-articles/last-minute-sun/comment-page-1#comment-292 Memoona Wed, 16 Apr 2008 04:58:30 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/short-stories/last-minute-sun/#comment-292 Everything is excellently written...its amazing and the use of words...is simply awesome...but...the title of the story...i found it lil mismatched ... i may be wrong but i am unable to find any relation between the title and the story.... Everything is excellently written…its amazing and the use of words…is simply awesome…but…the title of the story…i found it lil mismatched … i may be wrong but i am unable to find any relation between the title and the story….

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