Comments on: The Ring http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172 think free Mon, 26 Jul 2010 04:20:39 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Tahera http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-548 Tahera Fri, 27 Feb 2009 16:25:00 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-548 Thanks, Sanjay Kataria. You're very generous with your appreciation. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thanks, Sanjay Kataria. You’re very generous with your appreciation. I’m glad you enjoyed it so much.

]]> By: sanjay kataria http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-263 sanjay kataria Tue, 29 Apr 2008 17:47:37 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-263 That is truely amazing. It lingered my soul...Amazing read.. Keep it up!! You have a nice catch up with the words and the climax took my breath away... That is truely amazing. It lingered my soul…Amazing read..
Keep it up!!
You have a nice catch up with the words and the climax took my breath away…

]]> By: Tahera http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-262 Tahera Mon, 28 Apr 2008 05:25:05 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-262 Thanks, Batty...so very kind of you to take out the time to write such detailed comments and praise my piece so generously. Thanks, Batty…so very kind of you to take out the time to write such detailed comments and praise my piece so generously.

]]> By: batty http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-261 batty Thu, 17 Apr 2008 06:48:55 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-261 ok- the last part of this story..brought tears to my eyes... the desperation of your characters shines through, the ignorance of the blessed, who misunderstand the plight of the less fortunate - everyone is so full of superiority complexes about having done a good deed of the day, that they never stop to wonder that maybe it isnt enough... who likes to do something as debasing as begging? it is sheer humiliation to spread ur hands out infront of someone, and then to be rejected on top of that...over and over and over... fantastic piece.. it should be made into a short film the ring serving as the connection b/w all scenes and characters.. very, very well done! :) ok- the last part of this story..brought tears to my eyes…

the desperation of your characters shines through, the ignorance of the blessed, who misunderstand the plight of the less fortunate – everyone is so full of superiority complexes about having done a good deed of the day, that they never stop to wonder that maybe it isnt enough… who likes to do something as debasing as begging? it is sheer humiliation to spread ur hands out infront of someone, and then to be rejected on top of that…over and over and over…

fantastic piece..
it should be made into a short film
the ring serving as the connection b/w all scenes and characters..

very, very well done! :)

]]> By: Tahera http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-260 Tahera Tue, 15 Apr 2008 13:11:53 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-260 Jerkulez...thanks a lot. Jerkulez…thanks a lot.

]]> By: jerkulez http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-259 jerkulez Mon, 14 Apr 2008 06:16:32 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-259 Great peace, like the supernatural feel about it Great peace, like the supernatural feel about it

]]> By: Tahera http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-258 Tahera Mon, 14 Apr 2008 02:59:57 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-258 Look who's talking! Look who’s talking!

]]> By: Amir http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-257 Amir Sun, 13 Apr 2008 13:32:14 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-257 Tahera, you should start teaching us minors the art of expression and wizardry with words. Brilliant writing. Tahera, you should start teaching us minors the art of expression and wizardry with words.

Brilliant writing.

]]> By: Tahera http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-256 Tahera Sun, 13 Apr 2008 04:40:21 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-256 Umara...this is one of my experimental pieces - action, death and the supernatural - not my usual ingredients for a short story! I'm glad you found it an enjoyable read, and thanks for appreciating it so generously. Umara…this is one of my experimental pieces – action, death and the supernatural – not my usual ingredients for a short story!

I’m glad you found it an enjoyable read, and thanks for appreciating it so generously.

]]> By: umara http://www.libremagazine.com/columns/172/comment-page-1#comment-255 umara Sat, 12 Apr 2008 23:38:12 +0000 http://libremagazine.com/columns/172/#comment-255 Applause.......... Applause……….

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